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Novel, again

One part of the novel that I definitely haven’t been satisfied with is the moment when the main character Gets The Girl. It was definitely speed written during NaNoWriMo, and I thought it sounded cheesy and cliched.

I did some major work on that scene tonight, and while I’m still not satisfied with it I can say that it’s a major improvement.

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